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Hello, Mr. Deuel. I am not one of your current or former students, but I found your Substack by chance and have found it interesting and of quality. Seeing you and your students' work, I regret I cannot attend one of your courses. But, I would like to answer this prompt and request some of your feedback on my piece—just general impressions are fine. I wish to know how to improve my writing. If you're willing, this is the link: 

https://docs.google.com/document/d/17cZ389sKSbqSQO3dh8Y9nqDD7BgSOa6mHrEaE2znTFg/edit?usp=sharing. The piece is a fictional informal essay. Thank you.

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